Rustle

Autumn Haiku

The sound of the leafs

Swinging with the wind disguised

Your steps as you left

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Create a sad place using so few words. A amazing poem.
Coyote

[Chris]

I wonder if you look'd
...back - at all ...because I have
ev'ry ...single...day...since.

Melancholy moments touch deeply within and behind our eyes.

[Gray]

Saying it without saying it. Your tears are assumed. Clever write.

[Asante]

I enjoyed reading this little haiku. My first read of the morning, and a tribute to my favorite season of year. It captured the essence of Autumn. Good work!