Traffic Light

Winter Haiku

You drove me that night

Wishing for red traffic lights

Never enough time

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem. Sometimes seconds become important. Very nice use of words dear Elizabeth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[King Sleepless]

Never enough time... I like this poem

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Concise words based on a thought.

[Johnny]

I like what you wrote very much, you made it very relatable!

[Vria P Crow]

I am starting to see a pattern with you poetry; it is concise and meaningful. You take a unique approach with a haiku. Commonly, a haiku focuses on nature where you center around "human nature." From this short stanza, I get an image of a couple riding home after a date, not wanting to get out of the car because they want to spend more time together. Simple and elegant, indeed.

[Angel of the devil]

there are many means to tis poem. i love it. keep up the great work!!!!


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[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

Short poems are always my favorite because you can make an impactful statement with just a few words. It's also not easy to do, so I applaud you for taking the risk and doing it. The first two sentences are so powerful, it definitely makes you think. And, to be able to make someone think by just stating two sentences is a talent.

[PoeticSorcery]

never enough time for anything is there?

[BbyYeya]

I love this. There is many meanings with this piece. :)

[Valentine]

Pretty neat idea for a write. In so many instances that pass by so fast in life we need more red lights, Valentine