Lips

About unanswered questions.

Sitting next to you

I felt my lips getting numb

Because the blood 

Running inside them 

Wanted to know

How the blood 

Running

On your own lips 

Flows

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok picky I know but did you smack him? He seems to have blood 'on' his lips lol!
Another piece that portrays someone fixated with someone else.

[Chris]

Unanswered? or perhaps they weren't asked?

Seems so many pause in their silence ...only to continue it.

[Hailey Juliet]

Short, light and direct. I like this alot!

[Ashwin Shanker]

Very sensual and a very creative way to say, "I wanna kiss you :P"
Enjoyed reading this

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Like a daydream
thought out loud
imagining what would happen next...

[Einstein Noodle]

how interesting! lots left to the imaginations .. am i with someone who just doesn't shut up ..and i am getting ready to punch those lips ..or am i waiting for a chance to kiss those lips ..hm very interesting indeed ..your description only increases my wondering .. :}
E.

[WillaDanvers]

This is simple, and it holds a certain curiosity about it. I like this

[Bear]

I can help but chuckle because I have seen young people out on a date looking uncomfortable, and now I am wondering how many of them were thinking like this? I love this idea and feel motivated by it and I am considering writing something like this. Bravo! When you can inspire other writers you have done a great job five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words. You create place and a vision. Your good description made the situation come alive. Thank you Elizabeth for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote