through the swift thriving

e.e. cummings imitation

through the swift thriving

flash

i see;

thin spring

 

i grow thousands smiles

through the dust-colored glass

of blurry dusk,

through love-shined silk

 

i dance ungracingly. I

Through the fair frost desert

crystal mindingly enter

 

(how could it possibly be?)

breath is only

refreshments & beginnings

but the one surely

 

(also dust and ceasings)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Both are good. You and him...Bravo

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Masterfully crafted!! Your structure, flow and rhyming are exceptional, along with your well developed lines.

"i dance ungracingly. I
Through the fair frost desert
crystal mindingly enter"

[ekbay72]

Thank you!!