PATTERN OF PERFECTION

 

I love you she whispered
into the ether before time
A hint of what was to be
The unknown dawning of the sublime

I knew her when I saw her
the physical idealism of my heart
That delicate pattern of perfection
She transfixed me from the start
Coupled in our conversation
niether could deny what kismet's done
As our souls rose in pure elation
knowing they had found the one.

Destiny is pattern
it is linked throughout all time
and loving you is natural
It's Heaven confirming that your mine
So as we lay here in consummation
of this love that had to be
I whisper simply "I love you"
Knowing God made you just for me.

© 2012 Eddie K. Phillips

Reviews

[Aisha Mnd]

I very much liked this line:

A hint of what was to be
The unknown dawning of the sublime

You coin words together perfectly! Great job!

[Rita L. Sev]

I hope you share these beautiful poems with your wife, Eddie - she is blessed to have such a soul mate! Lovely poetry, my friend.

[Laminators Dubai]

its so beautiful eddie....and sweet too...

[Rosaria_V]

This makes me think if the saying, "we must not find the perfect person, we must see a un-perfect person perfectly" it's something like that haha. I love your poem and picture!! it's all so sweet

[Eddie Phillips]

Please comment. Bad or good I would appreciate the feedback. I am new on the site.