CAVE OF PASSION

That first exploration of passion.

 

In this shrouded cave of passion
Your body responds to my actions
Our virgin hands eagerly explore
As unfiltered desire begs and pleads for more 
Your chambered organ accepts new flesh
You scream in eager passion without any protest
Soulful eyes meet in the darkness of our mutual joy
A girl becomes a woman and makes a man out of a boy
The rhythm of ecstasy snaps, as our euphoria breaks
The bed resounds, as if the Earth itself quakes
Two virgins mold the others sultry clay
Giving and taking in this sensual game we play
We break in satisfaction at the first glow of day
Cuddling in the light with few words to say

 

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

Reviews

[Malcolmveli]

Firstly, I like the couplet rhyme scheme.

I like the way metaphors are used. The poem is written in a manner that also helps the reader visualize easily atleast I did.

[Aisha Mnd]

I love how this poem flows. I especially enjoyed the rhymes. It's beautiful!

[Bowers]

Great piece! such a serious thought... nicely done!

[Rita L. Sev]

A passionate piece, sweetness paired with sensuality... Well penned, Eddie!

[Tarry Franck]

Such a great piece of work. It spoke volumes to me. Keep up the great work my friend.

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

damn! thats a good piece well done a million...it simply spoke to me, im salivating for more!

[Peter H]

this is a good poem its very explicitly and profoundly written i loved it , keep writing good work

[Eddie Phillips]

Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed the poem. I write all over the place but I am happy when people enjoy something I wrote.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write. Well done.

[Eddie Phillips]

Thank you. This poem was a little bawdy. :)