VILE!

Sometimes you have to call people what they are.

 

 

Hell come take you!
You venomous vile snake!
Let the worms eat at your gizzards
Feeding on the acids of your hate

 

I've never spoken harm on any blessed soul
But you are malignant murky secretion
Oozing out of a hole in the Devil's soul

 

Who gave you this evil mind?
Who told you to attack my kin?
What idiotic thought process,

ever made you think that you could win?

 

I would call you stupid
But that would insult innocent fools
Instead I’ll call you a defiler
For you are a squalid squirming tool

 

I hope these words reach you
In full health and a clear mind
Because I want you to understand
This poems every exacting line

 

For out of the belly of the asinine
Seeping over the hemorrhoids of fiery hell
Percolates a festering servile slim ball

 

You!

 

Satan’s repugnant anal snail!

 

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

Reviews

[Azriel]

wow, really enjoyed this, such strong use of language, you can just feel the passion from reading it. Lots of great images used here as well, also the entire poem flows really well.

[Eddie Phillips]

Thank you. I wanted to explore a poem that had aggression, anger, and ill will. I wanted it to have no profanity and still come off insulting. LOL It is inspired by people who do others wrong. Thank you for reading and getting the passion of the piece.

[Azriel]

no problem, thank you for writing it, felt as though i could really relate to it.

[A. H. Pinley]

Seeping over the hemorrhoids of fiery hell
Satan’s repugnant anal snail!
Ouch!!!
Reject the lord of the air at all cost. Good work!

[Eddie Phillips]

LOL This poem is pretty aggressive. It was inspired by people who attack others without provocation. I enjoy the dark insulting feel of it without actually using one curse word. :) Thanks for reading brother.