IF I WERE LOVE

 

If I were love, you would never feel alone. 
Every man would see you as a queen and offer up his throne. 

If I were love, hurtful tears would never flow from your eyes. 
I would fill your soul with gladness so only joyful tears could slip by. 

If I were love, everything under Heaven you would possess. 
The world would give you everything and flock to your every requests. 

If I were loves personification,  I would ultimately have to become flesh. 
Just so I could hold you and let you feel true love at its best.  

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

Reviews

[s y e]

// If I were love you would never feel alone
Every man would see you as a queen and offer up his throne //

This is so good. I wish every guy felt like this. I think couples would be so much happier and actually last a while. ;-) Only thing I would say it add some punctuation.

[Eddie Phillips]

I know I am bad with punctuation sometimes. I just write ti out and let it go. I will do some editing soon. Its hard to focus on it with my schedule overseas. THanks for reading.

[s y e]

I suck at punctuation but I try my best. :P

[OriginAwesome]

"If I were loves personification I would ultimately have to become flesh
Just to be able to hold you, so you can feel love at its best" --- beautifully said

[Eddie Phillips]

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice romantic poem Eddie. Great job

[Eddie Phillips]

Thanks for reading.