DIVE IN

Nostalgia sets in when thoughts of far away shores spring to mind.

                                 DIVE IN

Dive into deep sultry eyes

Visualize, capture and share >>>

      experiences on offer.

See the sun kissed shores of an island paradise.

Watch the rolling tide glide slowly over each grain of sand>>>

each stroke brings to mind the calming feel of anxious hands

that pass caressingly over smooth delicate olive skin.

Views from a bedroom window with swaying voile curtains

revealed a glorious sunset that met spangled waters >>>

lapping the sides of boats as they dance in their moorings.

Watch the fading sun embrace the coming of the rising moon

                A spectacular sight to behold!

A masculine figure brings to mind that 'flutter' in heart and

                  the core of lover's being!

 Island girl ~ embrace this scene as most dreamers do,

for moments like these can be captured and be recalled 

                     as if by magic!

First written @ 8.20am on Friday 27.5.2016...Recreated on 5.11.2018

 

Author's Note

A search through the archives prompted me to try it from a different perspective.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful ambience you have created here kitty. You really bring both the atmosphere and beautiful imagery to this reader's doorstep. I am thinking, I would love to be there to experience that island paradise, the heat, the sunset and the voile nets being teased. Loved it. Thank you.

Chris

[kitty]

Just over two years I was inspired while on holiday. A lot of it is just imagination. had fun writing it!

[Chris Shaw]

Well kitty, you took me to where your imagination travels :)

[kitty]

Glad you enjoyed the ride!

[kitty]

The lapping waters created a lovely feeling of contentment and awe!

[Chris Shaw]

Water does have that effect doesn't it kitty? Can be mesmerising and calming.... on the other hand, quite the opposite. Good morning.

[Neville]

The first dive is the deepest.... but then once resuscitated & looked at from a different perspective... how could one not relax and enjoy the amazing picture you have created.... almost a view with a room.. innit :)

[kitty]

Tickleing my senses here. Cant swim but will take the odd dive! Can float though, in order to 'stay on top'. Thanks for an injection of healthy humour!

[Neville]

bless ya ..... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear poet.
"Watch the fading sun embrace the coming of the rising moon
A spectacular sight to behold!"
Nature an life show us beauty everyday. We must open our eyes. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like this one.
Coyote

[kitty]

I hoped that i could convey, by simple words, the ecstacy of the moment in time spent on an island paradise. Thank you for sharing the views and fe feelings the exued.

[Coyote Poetry]

I need a tropical place and you are welcome kitty.

[kitty]

Hopefully I can bring my visions to a page worthy enough for you to view.

[Paul Bell]

Miserable January, then you read of island paradise.
Just sitting on the sand with a drink in my hand watching this beautiful woman walking towards me.
It's working.

[kitty]

Just you be there Paul and you'll know what Paradise feels like: especially when that voile curtain gently rolls over a bare toned torso!...and the sun kisses your cheeks...seductive? Wow!

[Paul Bell]

That was working so well till someone reminded me of my tax bill, hate that.

[lightsong]

and I will always love the way You simply write magic! this is very very charming, very real to the senses, I can feel it was pouring from Your very core, to be lost in the wondrous of nature as if being lost in Your lover's eyes, to beckon him to come... I felt a Goddess speaking somewhere through Your words...

"Dive into deep sultry eyes
Visualize, capture and share >>>
experiences on offer."

what's more enchantingly alluring to start with than this! this is a VERY special poem dearest Kitty, Thank You for searching through the archives and for recreating this "gem"!

[kitty]

Have so many in store - the old fashioned way though. Havent mastered the art of saving by removable disc!

[kitty]

Sorry Gh. forgot to say thanks for the visit and a lovely review.

[lightsong]

No worries at all dear Kitty, I hear Your thanks even without telling me :)

[kitty]

U R a peach!

[lightsong]

So You surely are 💖🌼💖

[LazerRays]

Very dreamy and romantic. I love the setting. Now I wanna go somewhere warm because it's so cold here brrrrrr. And nice how you tied it in with the couples romantic attraction to each other. Hopefully they enjoy it there in tropical paradise haha

[kitty]

We can but dream Sarah at this time of year. I appreciate the changingseasons... being a romantic at heart, wit a passion for expressive thought that my Muse plays on. Please forgive my sticky keys. Most annoying Thank U so much for this visit.

[A hare off]

I really enjoyed this. Soft and warm and pleasing to the eye and heart.

[kitty]

Like the stroke of athe hare's soft delicate fur! Thank you for this visit to my humble page.