FANTACY ISLAND

This is for the young and young at heart. Sorry for the long lapse in post.

                    FANTASY ISLAND

You & Me ~ the way it should be!

Travel the ocean, ride the sea!

We'll pick our island, You and Me.

Nothing to mar us ~ we'll touch the sky

One step at a time ~ you and I

full of joy, no time to cry!

We'll clear a pathway ~ feet on solid ground

Look, there's no one near us, no one around!

Plain to see ~ we are alone ~ you and me

Love is within us, lets play that game...

      that young lovers do

taking it slowly ~ me and you.

Cherish these moments here in paradise

We will have them forever ~ love never dies!

Created @  9.00am on Fridai 1st March 2019

Author's Note

A mischevious kitten ready to play. The muse seems to be going her way!

Reviews

[lightsong]

O lalal! I don't mind going to that island now even if I was alone lol so good that Your muse is now dancing dear Kitty, Your fantasy and imagination start to fill the pages with these sweet dreamy moments, always a happy feeling and such joy to read You.

[kitty]

'They call me a dreamer...well maybe I am...far away over the seas..'' Thank you my dear friend for going on this journey with me. Your sweet feed back can always be counted on!

[lightsong]

YOU are a dreamer and please keep BE 🌈✨🌼🌻🌷✨

[kitty]

As long as my muse stays with me! Have a great week.

[Stella Armour]

the love game, played light and lovely...
True love never does die Kitty it lives on in our memories

[kitty]

'Snap ' on that thought. can be recalled when feeling nostalgic.

[Neville]

I am I allowed to pin something to this page since I am neither young, nor young at heart.. I am old, bitter and twisted, but I like taking part... even if it is only to deceive myself every now and then.... N

[kitty]

There is ever a 'Straight' woman/person willing to 'untwist' you... feel free to 'pin'

[Neville]

How perfectly pinned to my personal fantasy island.. I am almost popped..... :)

[kitty]

? Painstakenly 'un-pin'/un-twist you. lots of imagination there!

[Carola]

hi kitty
you really do rhymes very well & has a good rhythm.
nice to read about young love, but i'm a bit past it now!!!

i haven't been here for a while.
is it just me that finds those ads that masquerade as poems under the "New Poems" index really annoying.... those chinese ads ???? i don't read chinese but when you click on the so called 'chinese name' you can then see it's an advert. i contacted the administration once before but these pesky ads are still here !! do you find it irritating kitty ?

i written 2 more poems, if you're interested. cheerio, carola

[kitty]

Not impressed by the slotting in, of ads between our posts. Seems rude and non professional but what can we do about it. getting less inclined to post these days. Thank you for dropping in with a delightful review.

[Chris Shaw]

Delightful and playful kitty. A nice touch of romance here on a very wet miserable afternoon. That island surely sounds inviting. All good wishes.

Chris

[kitty]

Thanks Christine for your view on my playful little piece. nice to fantasize sometimes eh!

[Gee]

Psssst, Fantasy in the title, with a C.

[kitty]

We dream a little, play a little, romance a little then savour what comes next eh! Thanks Gee ror riding with the waves!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is really delightful...just plain love exposed.
made me think of a Moody Blues song..."it's up to you"--
and the lines..."in the land of you and me, all is an island, way out to sea"
nicely done, kitty...
j.

[kitty]

Thanks Jacob. Must check out that song! Have a great week end.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i believe it is on youtube...it is from the album, "Question of Balance"---

[kitty]

Ta very much. I will definately check it out as soon as I can.