On the Edge of Inbetween

Starting new relationships

For one moment in a parallel universe does our souls collide

Friendship that has laid dorment since the moon first controlled the tide

Cultivated in only a short time

Two hearts may find

Then sweetness of a greater power

 

It isn't easy to just walk away

Our paths will meet one day

but until then

I will always be your friend

Waiting on the edge of in between

Reviews

[Writer Of Life]

Well-done. I must tell you that it is never easy to sit and wait - precious little ways to share your life together.

Your friendship, turning to a love ever-lasting... that, well honestly, that is the way it is meant to be. THIS is the way we know its real... You seem to be headed in the right direction in both your life and your love. Stay on that course - if it is real - it is right! Believing that - there in some way there is some higher power that controls that aspect in our lives (as if it was meant to be in some way). Hum~ this is what I am feeling here. Finding this is true - will always love you for who you are.

Parallel, indeed. In many more aspects than that of the love you speak.

Beautiful write, young writer. Your writing artistry is clearly shown here through your emotions.

Keep writing!

Candi

[Leesah]

oh that last line is perfect....this was tenderly written, terrific work~

~L

[Nicholas Hallows]

You found a path to my heart
where your roots wrapped round mine, making it impossible to part.
From the earth, which appeared desolate and sour,
began to grow our flower;
that blossomed and bloomed and held forever in one, single yet timeless hour.

[Genie]

Oh I love the idea of waiting on the edge of in-between! And that's always the hardest place for me -- such a difficult time, seeing possibilities and waiting for them. What a grand job of bringing that 'space' into view without overpowering it!

[Nicholas Hallows]

Your words seem to have a feel of infinity. whatever that means, but they have an epicness about them, like time and space.