Realization

Just my ramblings......

Days have gone by, yet time stands

Why does it feel that life demands

Our full attention

 Submission

Relying on the father

Yet, sometimes you don't want to bother

 Relization

 Frustration

 Yet at night when fears take flight

 dreams just might

 Fill another beautiful morn

Reviews

[Nicholas Hallows]

I too love your ramblings - lucky for me ;)

Even when life is at its hardest we must hold onto our dreams because we never know when they may come true.

x

[Cyn]

Interesting... nice poem...

[The Musings of Mary H.]

Delightful! I believe this poem is a great foundation to start on...I recommend pulling this poem every so often and working with it a little. I have a poem I like to call my "troubled child" because we've had to buck heads many times. Now I feel like my "troubled child" is getting whipped into shape. My recommendation is looking up words in a thesaurus and playing with "new to you" words. I look forward to reading more works from you.

Mary

[Jessica L Auster]

I like your ramblings