Every Step

Just a ramble of my mixed up thoughts!

Time flying

Need to go

Sun shining

Need to know

Hear the calling

Prepare to flow

Searching for the answers

Coming closer

have to fly

Get out of what is holding

Live the life of peace

What is that?

Can I hold it?

Can I obtain this blissfulness?

Silent answers

Put into action

Golden rays of knowledge

Overpowering the closed-mind

Taking freedom with every step

Reviews

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This has a wistfulness to it that make it seem like much more then random thoughts. It flows well. Very Nicely Done.
Debby

[Sarajane]

ooh for being mixed up thoughts, i really like this! flows wonderfully and i really like how it is open to interpretation.

[thebrokenwillow]

Love this. Your poetry is different from a lot that I have read. I really enjoy it. Keep up the good work.

[Nicholas Hallows]

I love your ever-inquisitive truth-seeking nature and your understanding of what is really important in life. I know each step you take is towards the answers you seek. x

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

I liked this piece my fav line has to be - Golden rays of knowledge. Brilliant!!!

[Wolfwind Words]

This was wonderful!
I loved the way the words chased the sunshine and life of peace. And only by over coming the closed mind did the path become clear.
The was great random work of art!

[prettyzombiegirl]

Honestly, I'm not a big fan of poetry, but I love yours. Most of the time I find it boring and monotonous though, and some is just so cliche. Yours really flows from the tongue and it's quite pretty. Keep up the good work lady. ;-)

[The Musings of Mary H.]

I really enjoyed this poem! This poem asks many questions which tells me the poet is always thinking. I like a poet whom is always thinking because I can expect a lot of great things from her. Thank you for sharing!

Mary