Lost in thought

Just a rambling of words

 

 

Thoughts in the sun

coming undone

I sit and think

Life encircling

head buried

yet my eyes are open

Heart opened wide

sobs subsided

with the whistling of the trees

Taken for granted

what has been given

answers never come easy

letting go

freedom flows

as I lay basking in the rays

tears are dried

feelings of love

surrounding

for Spring is only a moment away

Author's Note

this is just a rambling of my words. You can always find some peace by laying in the grass basking in the sun.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Such a subtle beauty, soft and still... Love the vivid imagery and your gentle voice moving us to the spring awakening. I needed your words today... Thank you...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I really like this... it's show blissfully shows how we can lose ourselves looking forward to something in the future we can't make sense of the present. Awesome write.

[Tania Leigh]

The sun does wonders for our moods....it would be difficult not to feel some happiness from the warm light on you face and the cool grass on your skin.

A wonderful write for spring!

[Flow]

Yes this one made me smile since spring is close. I like how you spoke of the sun and it's rays like a healing medicine. this one is very good and I enjoyed it.

[Antony]

I love everything you paint in this well penned piece, When I can visualize what the writers words are saying, it is a great piece and that is how I enjoy reading. You have brought to life a simple enjoyment of, basking in the sun, with your own thoughts.
Antony

[Nicholas Hallows]

This is more than just a rambling of words.

letting go
freedom flows...
tears are dried...
for Spring is only a moment away.

I can just picture you laying in the sun with your drum at your side.
Another poem filled with your trademark inspirational energy.
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