Stop the machine

Aching, super-wired
blue noise upon waking
The electric blues have got me this time

We reduce & reuse the experience,
the zest
something immersive,
into something to digest

Reviews

[Neha agrawal]

"We reduce & reuse the experience" Amazing line ☺

[Grumpie]

The blues have got my mind lately too. A funny feeling to shake, lingers when asleep or awake. This very much played to my soul tonight, thank you for sharing your light! I especially like your second verse, I'm questioning myself what I'm trying to process...

[Reetta]

Hi thanks for your lovely comment, I’m glad it resonated with you ☺️

This poem was written about technology and socia media, and about how it reduces our experience of life, and how it makes me feel so super-wired because of the constant blue light

[Grumpie]

It is very different from how things must have been even just twenty years ago. I actually got my hands on a typewriter recently, I highly recommend, it's pretty fun.