Two-step

Two-step

A Poem by Reetta

Dance with me tonight
In your dusty shoes
And whisper dirty woos

Make me fall in love with
sweet cou cous

Then step on my toe
And do it slow

smear fear on my soul
I let it go

© 2025 Reetta


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You need to trot over to Amazon and read the excerpt from Stephen Fry's, The Ode Less Traveled. There's a LOT more to writing poetry than there appears to be, and he can get you started.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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JayG

5 Months Ago

Yes, it was written for for you. But you posted it in public for others to read, in a form unintelli.. read more
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Reetta

5 Months Ago

Hi thanks again for your suggestions. If anything, I think I conveyed my distraught mood rather well.. read more

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Added on July 31, 2025
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Reetta
Reetta

United Kingdom