Good Bye

She closes the door

It clicks, echoing

She walks, softly, through the silent rooms

Green, white, blue walls

Doors waiting, drawers closing

Empty space showing

Down cold stone steps

Purple, red, pink flowers

Trees watching, branches waving

Bye...bye

"Goodbye" she whispers

Author's Note

I do not own this picture. Please review. Thank you

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Lovely picture of saying good-bye, i mean the one who draw by your words!..so beautiful, like a little part from a movie, even the colors are so vivid!! :)

[sarah]

This is a really interesting write I really liked it great write!

[Jazique]

Nice simple and sweet. Very descriptive as if nature is saying good bye to her. Well done. Keep up the excellent work.

[J. R.]

Another brief yet powerful piece. Keep up the good work

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Very good. You are one of the best writers on here, very good job.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great flow of emotions!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i can feel the emotion in this one, great job!

[SpokenWord]

This reminds me when we first moved from the city to the suburbs. It was weird walking through the home I had spent my life in and going to a new home that I had never seen. As a child I remember how bare the house looked without furniture of fixtures. It was a sad day but exciting day too. A new home, new friends and new adventures. Enjoyed the read.