I See

I see how you are
All smiles
Yet beneath lie scars
That have made you
Created you
Your head is in the past
Running, reaching for you
Like a shadow searching
Don't wanna lose you
You're blind to those out there
Who care
The shadows catch your eye
Voices whisper in your head
Rising
Don't you see where you are now?
The past is gone
The shadows dead

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I loved this piece too! seems like we have familiar feelings and way to express the world around...I liked this :
Your head is in the past
Running, reaching for you
Like a shadow searching

We all have shadows from the past, important is to preserve them in clear images...

[Jazique]

Mystical, short, simple and sweet. well done I really the worlds in it all as the "the past is gone, the shadows dead." You did a wonderful job using a little creative idea of what you see. Keep up the excellent work.

[BeetleBug]

Wow.

[sarah]

I think it's good to remember to not live in the past cause all it does it cause regret and pain. We need to always focus on the future and the people we are surrounded by in the moment. But the past does form our future, great write!

[Daydreamer54]

Yep, when ur an impulsive lier, ppl start to not believe anything u say and then ur truly alone. great write! ^^

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really good and dark with a strong message!