Late Night Rendezvous

I succumbed to a haiku. D: Just kidding, I actually quite like them :)

Cold linoleum

Succumbing to midnight lust

Refrigerator

Author's Note

Haha, so uh, I was told by a friend to write a haiku (the only type of poetry said friend likes) that included the word 'refrigerator', as it's five syllables. And this is what popped out.
Also, lust can also be defined as having a craving, appetite, or desire. :) Or, perhaps, if you really want, this person just really wants to get it on with the refrigerator.
Your pick ;P

Reviews

[APOORVA]

u made me laugh.
a good one

[Steve]

Wow. I was thinking this one was going some where i else at first!! Then i had to readjust....

:0)

[reminder]

So simple, so powerful! Terrific imagery. Well done!

[.]

i like the way this infers a moment :)
~a very captivating Haiku~

:)

[Jason Clement]

On second review, it sucks.

You suck too.

Please stop writing. And die. Promptly.

That is all.

Love and peace,
Jason Clement.

[Claude]

Wow, the imagery generated by your words!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

what a heated little poem!

[GTVile]

Hahahahahaha! I really like it. Its very clever. Awesome.

refrigerator
encases my one true love
within its cold walls ;)

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Ha! I got it the moment I read it. Probably because I work the night shift and know about those late night hungers you just can't say no to. You wrote this poem for me, didn't you?