Late Night Rendezvous

I succumbed to a haiku. D: Just kidding, I actually quite like them :)

Cold linoleum

Succumbing to midnight lust

Refrigerator

Author's Note

Haha, so uh, I was told by a friend to write a haiku (the only type of poetry said friend likes) that included the word 'refrigerator', as it's five syllables. And this is what popped out.
Also, lust can also be defined as having a craving, appetite, or desire. :) Or, perhaps, if you really want, this person just really wants to get it on with the refrigerator.
Your pick ;P

Reviews

[Steve]

OMG I have a dirty mind i guess........lol

[fireblossom]

I like it...I relate to it.

[Aven]

Haha, either way I like it. "Succumbing to midnight lust" is such a great line. I might succumb to some midnight lust myself. :O

Thanks for sharing! :)

[Antonio Valentino]

What place is craved for more, then the the refrigerator :)

Loved this, great job!
Antonio

[Crusaderscross]

Really enjoyed this piece. Very nicely written.

[Fernando Pessoa]

It's all in how you spin it, and you've spun us all right round here. That haiku can do so much with so few lines still amazes me!

Alan Seeger: “I have a rendezvous with Death At some disputed barricade, When Spring comes back with rustling shade And apple blossoms fill the air.”