Iron poetry for an Iron Fist

A short incantation I made for a particular character of mine. Feels motivational, so I decided to post it here.

I am energy unbound,
a trait of life unfold, profound,
essence of an ancient spirit,
shadowless, I am judgment, fear it!

Let my rising, splitting echo
wake and stir worlds from slumber,
unknown to fear, nor to doubt
and rise against the dark, aloud.

I am honor, wrapped in wrist,
I am striking iron fist.

Author's Note

Haven't written anything recently so this is an attempt to fill up the hole somehow.

Reviews

[M. L. F.]

I love the spirit of your stuff so much. It has a very mysterious eyed ferocity about it, if that makes any sense.. I sometimes ramble. ;). Thank you for sharing with us.
.. Misty

[elvenom]

Thank you so much for the kind review. I am incredibly warmed by your choice of words. The most adorable ramble I've ever heard ^^

[M. L. F.]

In that case, I will ramble about your work more often.. ;)

[elvenom]

Be my guest, anytime :)

[M. L. F.]

Ok, deal... ;)

[Moonie]

Oh wow, this is so powerful! The rhymes are excellent and the length of the lines is perfect. My favourite lines would be
"Let my rising, splitting echo
wake and stir worlds from slumber,"
I like how you made 'spirit' rhyme with 'fear it'.

[elvenom]

Thank so much for your kind words, fairest one, it means a lot to me. Since rhymes get less and less original I'm trying to find new pathways and thus develop new rhymes ^^