Seeds

Today the air is full of white 

seeds drifting, floating

over my garden

I know a breeze must carry them

But I can't see it --

I only see a journey

of wild twists and falls

and sudden, miraculous rising

to the white sky

there are thousands

each upon its own path

and I think

there's hope

Author's Note

Hiya! Thanks for reviewing my work, any suggestions are appreciated!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Visually pleasing. A sight I have seen myself. Quite a journey to witness. First of yours I have read. Nice to meet you.

Chris

[Elyne Knight]

Thank you very much Chris - nice to meet you too!

[JMaster1]

its beautiful
I love your style , your tender touch of words

[Elyne Knight]

Thank you so much for your kind words!

[Andrew John]

A way to find hope. Hmm, I rather like this one, Elyne.

[Elyne Knight]

Thank you Andrew!