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A Poem by Emaan Zahra Ijaz
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People, especially the evolving youth, are facing depression, anxiety and lack self-confidence in doing things.The haiku tries to speak to the heart of those in pain and hopes to better their thinking

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This strong heart believes.

Luminous spirit lives,

A goal after the storm.

© 2019 Emaan Zahra Ijaz


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Actually i like it . Just that word goal sounds to me too plain. I will be prefer more words like a spark or hope. But otherwise it' great positive thought.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Emaan Zahra Ijaz

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, let me see if i can edit it..

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I'm Emaan Zahra Ijaz. With a passion for writing, learning, and researching as well as reading, of course, I like to think of myself as an honest writer. more..