You make me.

You make me laugh, you make me cry.

You make me smile, without a try.

You make me feel great.

Even if i'm not, this is fate.

You make me sound smart.

You make me feel like a beautiful peice of art.

You make me try the things I should do.

You make me feel the way I feel,

 

The feeling of loving you.

Reviews

[Kayla]

This poem is very sweet, and you conveyed your feelings effectively. I don't know if you are into writing dark poetry, but every time I write a mushy-love poem I try to write a dark, morbid poem to keep myself balanced. Instead of writing a positive affirmation at the end, write a negative one. For example,
You make me vomit, you make me sick
You make me want to beat you with a stick.
Or you can write a juxposition poem where you have a positive and a negative.
You make me laugh, you make me cry
You make me smile, I wonder why?
Just some fun ideas to push you past your comfort level!

[Dillon Cotter]

This is quiet wonderful. So much expression and emotions =]

-Will

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe that is so sweet... a simple but precious piece of poetry.