Which One?

I am in love with both of you.

Why can't you just see that I am always hurting inside.

I know we just met, but I felt a click as soon as i saw you.

I know we've been going out for a little while, but I just don't know anymorw.

Which one, I know I don't really know you but I can't help my emotions.

Which one, I can't decide.

Either way i lose!

God, please help me, I know I haven't been the best.

Why can't i decide? The world is so hateful.

You make me so mad, yet you make me so glad.

Which one, I have no clue?

Reviews

[Jmartins]

Nice poem..

[Emily B]

there is time to learn . . . only you can answer questions like these

[E. A. Fielder]

This reminds me of a book I'm writing... stuck between two men. I like it except for the intro. I hope you don't mind a bit of harsh criticism but one of the unspoken laws of poetry is that "I love you" or "I'm in love" is one of the major cliches of writing. Other than that I really liked this piece! I'm sure a lot of women have been stuck in that predicament before.

[deeps]

Such intrguing questions you have asked yourself
Only you know the answer too them.
Very well stated!