The Mirror

Who is this other person?

Does that person in the

Mirror

Really me

Or just a dream?

Does she live in another world?

Is this other world far away?

Where is this other

Me?

Where is the other

World?

Does she see me the way

I see her?

Winner

Mar 12, 2015

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• The Mirror

Author's Note

Hope you liked it!!

Reviews

[Ana B.]

beautiful play of words into a very good riddle. Loved it!

[Emily]

Thanks Ana!!

[Confuser]

I loved it and you have made me wonder too; how do we ever really know. Wow. Great writing. Dale

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Confuser]

You're welcome! I imagine you so tiny and sweet, studious and smart, talented and fun! I felt bad I forgot to read your work. Dale

[Emily]

No it ok, don't feel bad!

[Confuser]

Thank you Emily; I worry too much sometimes. Dale

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Does she?!

Who knowz?!! I loved it! Itz unique and refreshing read! Thanks for sharing it dear friend.

Have a great day!

-Anjana

[Emily]

Thanks Anjana!

[Lavender Soya]

Short but potent, the lines make me wonder the same thing. The persona's curiosity is quite remarkable. Nice work!

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Lavender Soya]

My pleasure. :-)

[Terrence Chang]

Nice one. It is an old thought that you arose it once more to me.

[Emily]

Thanks Terrence!!

[Terrence Chang]

Your welcome Emily

[Roshan Nair]

Nice write emily! little haunting, little lost , but beautiful. cheers

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Nyu]

I really liked it. It reminded me of my Optics class I took in which we studied the world on the other side of the mirror. This poem is an interesting thought and was a nice read.

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Lizardo]

Makes me think about a theory that says that maybe theres another world in the other side of the mirror,
"Is it me or just a dream?" well penned line.
Beautiful poem!

[Emily]

Thanks Lizardo!!

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"Does she see me the way I see her".... Mirror is just a reflection of the physical attributes... the reflection of ones soul are the eyes of our loved ones..... good read anyway.... :)

[Emily]

I know that, it was just a good thought to have in a poem!
Thanks for the review!