Sand People

You etch Diana F eulogies to a backdrop 
Of 1957 Pacific Ocean pinholes 
Your fingertips are film 
And you brand my half-smile
Into a portrait of California
As if we will live here
On the beach
And sand dance 
For always

Chicago gasps me back

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

You convey moods and emotions so very well with your gasp-inducing language. This is a work of beauty, succinct and powerful.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice tale in the poem. You gave life to the photo and the sand. I did like the logical ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The Twin Arenas]

Ha, nice.

You love Chicago.

Ever read that guy Carl Sandburg? Last line reminded me of him, a little. Gasping Chicago.