Numb

Numb is not a feeling
It's rock bottom
It's the end

Numb,

Is an understatement to describe my being

Death is far easier than life,

and death i shall pursue

For now,

I am numb

Reviews

[Claude]

You describe a hole many fall into so well. The choice of "numb" is the word that connects all sorts of despair with your piece. Well done!

[Norma M Sutton]

Well stated.

[Aven]

"death is far easier than life, and death I shall pursue" nicely written. :)

[luciddreamer]

really nice write :)

[Wish!!!]

Liked it's expression in brevity... clear perspective...keep penning

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

in brevity you speak volumes about a state of static being~ neither moving forward nor back~ powerful~affecting write~

[Abd-afeez]

that is short but notwithstanding says a lot. its a great poem keep it up.

[dreamer :)]

This is awesome!!! I really liked it. It was somber and realistic and makes you realize how succumbing people are to death. They need to be open and let death take its toll.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

You seem to have my same feelings. Only I try to make myself numb. I try to make myslef not feel anything but i still do. I enjoyed this immensly. I sennse you are very strong. You deal with alot. If u ever want to talk message me. Anyway, I believe you are an incredible writer thaat you could write so little but I could feel so much thorugh your writing.. You are incredible.

[Love Is Dead]

Nice write.You have described what people always go through.

"Numb,
Is an understatement to describe my being"

i love this line.