Angel Eyes

 

 

ANGEL EYES

No eyes, I know would be brighter
No smile ever warmer
Heaven child
Whose eyes I will never know
Whose smile I will never see
Your face would be perfect
Your beauty, astounding
Everything I'll never know
Is all I could ever want.

 

Reviews

[Nansi London]

Its odd. I say that not in negativity. In fact...you conveyed your tune quite clearly. Its just, odd to me because it brought a change of emotion that was so rapid and touching for the reader. Well I could vow for myself. It touhed me. The feeling of lost hope...of being happy yet so sadden all at once. God its frustratingly wonderful. bittersweet. I love this write because honsetly? It was drenched in raw emotions and...I love that. No fake feelings were given off. Just...real hurt.

Don't ever drop your pen....
London

[Eagle Cruagh]

Sometimes your subject matter saddens me

but you write about your feelings and that is
the way to be.

I think you are a very talented writer, each poem
leaves me wanting more of you .

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Jinx's Heart]

This gave me such an interesting perspective. I don't know if that was the authors intentions, but it made me think. Very interesting work you wrote. Please write more! I'm really interested in your work. :)