Hello fellow writers, readers, and poets?
I hope y'all are doing well?😊
Following is my stanza for submission:
A sincere eye,
With truth, empathy inside,
The one that ain't
Love or hope devoid,
The one that never,
Holds pride,
A soul that can always be relied
The one that breathes peace,
That shimmers in sparkling delight
...its all that matters
...Its all that matters.
Saumya Srivastava
India
Posted 1 Month Ago
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Many thanks for leaaving such sincere words, Saumya
In a world often crude.
Does peace, love and trust elude?
Perhaps all should embrace,
Empathy in their future.
LisaCarol
USA
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Such gentle and finely conceived words, dear friend.
Wishing all you wish for yourself and lo.. read moreSuch gentle and finely conceived words, dear friend.
Wishing all you wish for yourself and loved ones.
That's THE question for today's world, isn't it. Peace to the world is lacking because of political .. read moreThat's THE question for today's world, isn't it. Peace to the world is lacking because of political strife and tragically missing empathy, Richard. More than sad.
1 Month Ago
Sad, Em?
Yes, I agree, but there's an inescapably positive lesson in those 24-words f.. read moreSad, Em?
Yes, I agree, but there's an inescapably positive lesson in those 24-words for all in the World to join together, creating a better Future filled with Empathy, Trust, Peace, and Love … six wonderfully powerful words, indeed.
Thank You and Craig for sharing them. ☮💛🙏
1 Month Ago
Empathy and generosity have always been your gifts - many thank yous, sir. t
Our world, a vibrant tapestry stretched on canvas
Thoughtfully woven with silken heartstrings
Its earthy rainbow colours uniquely named
Peace, Love, Trust, Empathy, Future
Country: Australia
Carola Hume
Posted 1 Month Ago
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Four superbly fine lines, Carola! Seems to me you feel your poem's words desperately and deeply. M.. read moreFour superbly fine lines, Carola! Seems to me you feel your poem's words desperately and deeply. Many sincere thanks.
The 'good book' says that "On the morning of the third day, God gathered the waters and caused dry land to appear, and the gathered waters he called seas". Then, man threw out some of the inhabitants of the land and blew up fishermen on the seas. Who can we trust if we can't trust our impulses? Find the brightest star in the sky. Follow it.
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I think more would follow that brightest star more if Mankind rememberedto look up at the sky: peop.. read moreI think more would follow that brightest star more if Mankind rememberedto look up at the sky: people are too busy thinking of what they can see terrestrially rather celestially. Our impulses have converted into haphazard 'what's on Life's menu this week thats cheap to buy but might - all being well, give self an extra dime or penny. Yet the free sky and distant erratic coming and going of small things-precious are so often missed. We should all 'stand and stare' at least three times in twenty four hours. Dark moods and dark night skies might hide magic and more but that said glory IS EVER present.
I follow it as do you - more should try to slow down and do the same if only now and again.. and again: ad infinitum. Abundant thanks for sharing your wisdom, sir. Smile from my world to yours.
The world as we know could not be without peace
And built on trust and empathy
We look for the future we have
And love it as it is
Country :US
Marie Kinnett
Posted 1 Month Ago
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We do indeed need to look for the future - plus, learn from the past. Love more, hate less... and .. read moreWe do indeed need to look for the future - plus, learn from the past. Love more, hate less... and as your words stress: ' look for the future we have And love it as it is
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I know, that's why we need to do more to stop the hate
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One hundred percent TRUE! :))))
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The more hate we have the less chance we will have a better future
Ghibran, ' To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night.'
More short story writer than poet but I try!
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