60th

One hundred seventeen days

Of mindful maze

My eyes have gazed

Fully amazed

 

So busy

Too witty

Like the ants

Occupied hands

 

The plan is to finish

A skirmish

A battle of time

Mime

 

All are written

Smile can be seen

Of the writer’s face

60^th pace

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love the rhyming in this piece. I think you did a good job on writing this. Thank you for sharing.

[AK]

Wow! Great poem! The rhyming scheme really brings out the beauty in the poem. Keep writing!

[Brittany]

Hmmm...I'm not sure I get it. At first I thought it was about longing for someone, but the last stanza throws that off. Explain?

Suggestion: pace or place?