understand

you're sick of felling down

you're not the only one

i'll take you by the hand

And i'll show you the world

That you can understand

this life filled with hurt

When the lights go out

You will understand

 

Reviews

[Living Proof.]

very short but very good!

[RIO]

Nice...

[Wondering Mind]

This reminded me of "Hello Darkness, my old friend"- by Paul and Art. A sweet write.

[sarah]

this is really good :)

[Voice]

Nice poem very great write!! :)

[Marie Harrison]

I'm thinking your're talking to someone who's younger possibly a sibling. I enjoyed this poem. It's very sweet.

[Trevor]

this seems quite similar to a very, very good song...hmmm. listen to three days grace often? =P

[YYPSNicoletse]

that is very good!

[Alexa Tasch]

This is really good. It really relates to the real world and shows your feelings

[Cody Wiggins]

Wow i understand where your coming from that's for sure