cruel

the world is so cold

so cruel

i freeze at night when im alone

because i miss

your warm arms around me

there to protect me

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

So, I would first say, nice emotion. I would include more punctuation, go through and check that you haven't made typos... all that stuff. I would also consider changing up your word choice to make this more interesting. Perhaps elaborate on the emotional connection between the speaker and the one she's talking to?

-Coral-

[sarah]

Man I think everyone as asked these questions

[luciddreamer]

I feel the emotion of this one...like the colors :)
Peace

[.]

heartfelt piece..well done

[Marie Harrison]

So sad. Loved the color of your font. Lots of emotion in this write. Bet you felt better after writing this poem.