unconditional love

i fell in love with you

the very first time i saw your face

i thought you loved me too

but that proved to be wrong

you broke my heart

but i still love you

its called unconditional love

 

Author's Note

please review :)

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

A very conditional, unconditional love...In my opinion, the only answer is to love more. Loving hearts never break, they get wounded and bleed love to heal in love.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

truly unconditional indeed. I once wondered what the reason for unconditional love was for. But now I understand that it is there to keep us sane with faced with the imperfections of others. It keeps us protected from making a situation worse with hate and anger. Though we want it to go away sometimes, we should embrace it. It is not for the other party so much so as it is for us. Thank you for sharing.

[Marie Harrison]

What a gift to love in such a way! Shows you have a big heart. These are great traits to have. Lovely poem.

[RIO]

aww...pretty sad.
Sorry if this doesn't help but I can't really review poems...but, yh, this was good.
x

its the entire feeling or the trap of life you suffered now you know what is wrong? and what is right?

[Alexa Tasch]

It is a sad little poem but it flows fairly smooth especially the first 3 or 4 lines.ver emotional and good.