tears

A Poem by Abbie

Tears run down my face

you don't understand me

what I'm going through

I'm diffrent I get it

Why do you treat me like I'm retarded

I'm not

I though you were my friend

but your a liar

thats why tears run down my face

© 2010 Abbie

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CookieMonster:)&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;

CookieMonster:)♥♥�..

i really like it:)

Posted 14 Years Ago

ME	very thoghtful!?!?!?!?! Posted 14 Years Ago very thoghtful!?!?!?!?! Rating /100

Steph's_romantic_mystery

Steph's_romantic_myster..

This poem is a great expression of heartbreak over a loss of a friend, I have been there many times, and Every word I have spoken to my self (just not so elouquently) Another 100/100 and a favorite for my library

Posted 14 Years Ago

I can deffently relate!

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

One Error I See Is "Though" Should Be "Thought".
I thought you were my friend.

But This One I Like Cause It Expresses Your Feelings For Someone Close.
Unleash The Moment I Say. Nice Poem Sweetie. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago

it's okay to cry, my friend. The sky has done so ever since Adam and Eve, and Cain and Abel.
The sun will shine bright after that... :)

Posted 15 Years Ago

how i feel 2 day :(

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on November 2, 2010
Last Updated on November 2, 2010

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Abbie

taco bell, NM

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my name is Abbie, i love 2 write poetry,but i am mostly nice anything you want to know ask more..