good bye isn't for forever

my mom died and i wrote a poem about her here it is

I miss you now that your gone

its all my fault

now that your gone

its not your gone but still remember

I love you with all my heart

now that your gone i'm always sad

like a whiskey lullaby

but I still miss

and i love you so much

goodbye

but it isnt forever

I still miss you

Author's Note

thats my mom who passed away 6 -23-06 i really loved her and always will :(

Reviews

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This was a beautiful heart felt poem and a remarkable tribute to your mom. She is smiling at you from heaven for this, and she must be very proud!

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. I believe we need to remember the good people who have touched our life. I like the desire to see your mother again one day. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

Goodbye is never forever, I definitely agree. I am sorry to hear about your lose, but I am sure she is smiling at your expressing your love for her through your poetry. If you keep their memory, then they'll never leave your life. There are a few grammar/spellings mistakes... but you can easily fix those and they aren't really important unless you are attempting to publish or if you are a perfectionist. :P

[*skittlez*]

you need to fix some of the grammar mistakes you spelled remember wrong you spelled it like this : remenber that is it and you are right good bye isnt forever i agree with lesle oh i mean sunshine13 and i am also very srry bout your mom ny dad pasted i know how you feel with that to just remember abbie i love you as a friend though lol

[SunShine13]

your right good bye isnt forever
i know how you fell some people in my family passed away i miss them so much!!!!

[Elmo!!]

awww im srry bout ur mom thats really sad i love your poem though it is very sweet