Someday

things i hope to have and or do when i'm older

Someday I will get married

Someday I will have kids

Someday I will have a job

Someday I will help save whales

Someday I will end world hunger

Someday I will end all wars

Someday I will........

Author's Note

suffering from writers block please rate and review

Reviews

[James Bonner]

I like this. Someday I will make a difference. Personally I would have ended it transitioning "someday," with "today"... "Today I will..."

That is, however, just a direction I might have gone. :)

[Moflo]

This was actually pretty creative. I feel like you could expand it, and maybe do away with the "save whales" line...but you're definitely onto something, I think.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is a cute little way to end writer's block... You gave it a poetic like feel with the repititous Some day... and You have also named not only your goals, but Alot of peoples goals, that makes the poem more personal to the reader. Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

I wish you success in all the possibilities of "the someday." Need someone to save the whales and end world hunger/end all wars. We need more people with hope and less with goals of war and abuse of nature. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Liza]

hopeful write with productive intentions...

that day you will look back and want this day back...
i remember writing this very list 17 years ago; the thing about this is we program our mind to live tomorrow and when we get to tomorrow - we want yesterday back....

enjoy the present gift of the now -