walking

I walk on the beach

next to you

your my dad

 

But do you care

it seems that any

thing i do is

wrong with a capital W

 

I'm not perfect

never will be

never ever

but dad i love you ♥

 

Is that why

you never call

we never talk

and 

I'M PROUD THAT YOU MY FATHER

 

Author's Note

This ones for my dad.i wonder if he really does love me but im still proud that he's my dad please review any grammar or any thing just say and i'll fix it. thx ♥♥♥

Reviews

[PaleWriter]

This is such a heartfelt poem and a bit sad. Your true personality shines through and your father should be proud of you.

[Ashley]

awww its so cute

[Steve]

This is very sweet! I love that you love your dad....

But this is so sad as well for obvious reasons. :0(

[Moflo]

I like how this poem escalated.

[lapacekjulie]

this is very sweet

[The Doctor]

Very good. Again, makes the reader think. I can almost relate. Again, very good at making something short become something large.

Grammer-

Last line should be- I'M PROUD THAT YOU ARE MY FATHER

[*skittlez*]

this is beautiful lol

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

this is really beautiful:)