Remedy

and I like when the sky

looks like the world's about to end

and parted clouds call the stars

that ask to be my friends

and my mouth, it bleeds words

that the nightmares try to bend

but the lights up above

promise me that I will mend

Reviews

[devon]

This is gorgeous writing. So very simple, so very effective. I also really enjoy the rhyme scheme. It gives the words a light, airy feel without detracting from the serious tone or message. Absolutely beautiful work.

[Paavana Varma]

Loved it! "but the lights up above promise me that I will mend". Beautiful lines

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a lot in the short poetry.
"but the lights up above
promise me that I will mend"
Some remedy are hard to find. But we must. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[terry smith]

Very nice!! loved the feel to this piece of art!

[Duckey]

I love it, and i love the meaning behind it

[Emily]

Nice wording!
Well done!!