Using Salt Would Have Been Easier on Me

imagine yourself standing in the first hour

that introduces the orchestration of winter

like you usually do

first the strings of snowfall

then the percussion that accompanies your nights

imagine your favorite statue downtown

disguised in white

DOXUS

it says at the bottom

or so you tell me

because you can't see well

and you never got close enough to check

imagine that sort of exhaustion from uncertainty

and weight for the endurance of the cold

now imagine me

melting at the end

because you've made it to the spring

be safe

Reviews

[PoeticChico]

OK, i just read it a few times and I get it and I think it's a great piece. But, I want more!
PS. I love metaphors

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem. Title brought me in and the words made me want more. I could create a epic poem from your amazing thoughts in this poem. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote