Maybe Thoughts Shouldn't Become Comments

if my god is

unlike your god

and he is

whose god do you think

is better?

my god says to obey

but so does yours

but my god gives me a choice

but so does yours

my god lives inside my head

but so does yours

my god's temperament isn't agreeable

but neither is yours

my god doesn't allow me to live without him

but yours does

so I guess I don't know

but my god doesn't encourage an audience

like yours does

Reviews

[B]

I guess
this idea of each one fighting for their god
when all religions on earth have striven for none judgement and for allowing people to be
Leaving judgement for only god and not people
I think you do such a great job here of depicting this picture of finger pointing and segregation and drawing lines that do not exist
if anything we should be all fighting for freedom
to love everyone freely with no labels
and no judgement
I think God would be pleased with that

This is pretty cool

[terry smith]

...my god like to play parcheesi on tuesday nights....whatever god we have the important thing is he/she gives us hope...strenght...and a peacfulness...loved the poem!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem.
"but my god doesn't encourage an audience
like yours does"
I believe faith and sexual preference should be private. People who force religion and hate for different. Need to hold silence. I liked the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote