Let Love Begin

I want to feel you

In me, around me, through me

I want to touch you

Your lips, your hips, your fingertips

I want to rush into you

Colliding, confiding, sliding

Feel my secrets erasing

Feel my dreams chasing

Feel my pulse pacing

Let it flow from within

Let it surface to your skin

Let love begin

Reviews

[Thistle]

Beautiful, love this alot.

[MOON]

It resonates and has a great beat.

[Penlady]

Let the love begin! One doesn't meet a soulmate often. Your desire for love in these words describes the way every one wants to love. It is possible, I speak as one who has lived it and loved it. Beautiful work, beautiful, realistic world if one desires it strongly enough!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Rhythm, rhyme, flow and simplicity........ These words define your poem....
Though you could have used some metaphors or similes, but i guess its fine until the reader likes the poem and in this case i definitely like it...

[Priscilla Sayers]

A beautiful flow and rhythm. The feeling of new love as we begin with feverish desire just to be near the one that intoxicates our senses. Very romantic!

[Mary Fioratti]

Very sweet poem. You wrote in a way that shows that this love = is full, complete.
No secrets, no barriers. Just true soul. "Let love begin", without any lies.
Love it.
*Mary*

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like it.
Great Job

[THE LOST ROSE]

I am glad I saw this piece. My side needs to come out and pieces like this tear off the surface that the real me is hiding underneath. Amazing piece. Brief, creative and powerful as hell!

[Lyrical Love]

Oh my...
I don't think I should have read that at this time-yikes!
What can I say, but...
~I loved the flow, and the way it worked me. Great write.
Gee, thanks. (LOL!)