Dear June
I love the first few lines, bitter as they are… so truthful… “Hard to swallow”…. Like life is sometimes hard to swallow…. I love your wit, your cynicism…. So cleverly weaved in….bravo!
Warmly,
B🌷
You have a lovely style dear; I would have recognized this as yours even if anonymous. That last stanza is killer, I just love it. I’m never sure to what extent you are being autobiographical and to what extent fictional, but I know there is drama in your life. Drama seems to make for good poetry.
This was a wonderful meal to digest, even with the witty arsenic. I have read this 3 times already because I like the threat and the wit. Looking forward to the chef's return!
It sounds like you are going to avoid the classic American midlife crisis. Well done. Half the 40+ population here is totally insane, did you know that? You probably already knew that. Ha... you will see in a different way though, personally as you age. American 'adults' are f****n' crazy man. You as well, will go crazy... eventually.
You know, your reviews make me laugh. Like sincerely, because you're so right! Whos not to say Im no.. read moreYou know, your reviews make me laugh. Like sincerely, because you're so right! Whos not to say Im not crazy already . . . I just never know for sure if this means you liked the piece or not.
6 Days Ago
I likey. I wouldn't have gone on and waxed idiotic otherwise.
6 Days Ago
Never idiotic, always appreciated in one way or another. 💕
☆ emunah june
☆ she/her (female)
☆ twenty-nine years young
☆ behavioral health
☆ married (est. may 12th, 2025)
☆ autistic / ADHD
☆ poetry, short storie.. more..