Feathers.

Feathers.

A Poem by Pao

His kisses were like a drug to me…

They were so gentle..

Like feathers. 

And every time I got one..

I wanted one more..

                 -e.p

© 2014 Pao


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This is like a lighter addiction since one can be addicted to kisses but probably not feathers. These too different nouns work together though. Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Eva
Short n sweet. Beautiful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like Devon said, short and sweet. And beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet. Nicely done and I always like when poets leave their initials at the end of their poetry as you have done.

:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pao

11 Years Ago

Thank you(: It means a lot.
devon

11 Years Ago

You're definitely welcome!

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Added on January 18, 2014
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Pao
Pao

San Diego , CA



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Welcome to the window to my heart, enjoy your stay more..