Goodies

 

 

 

 

They,re wrapped up in paper,

and tied with a bow,

they,re mysterious secrets,

we,re not meant to know.

 

We gasp with such joy,

when the paper is torn,

and we see whats inside,

the bow left all forlorn.

 

Its not just surprises,

that makes me feel fine,

i get the same feeling,

from drinking good wine.

 

When i,m down by the river,

the sound of the birds,

makes my heart skip a beat,

it is really absurd.

 

The dew on the roses,

in the morning sunshine,

the meadows of cornflowers,

the smell of springtime.

 

all of these things,

are special to me,

the smallest of insects,

the biggest of trees.

 

And when dusk it falls,

you lead me upstairs,

our bodies as one,

nothing else can compare.

 

without all these goodies,

i would not exist,

they,re there to excite us,

how can we resist.

Reviews

[Windy]

Good job, Enjoyable read and definatly true! :) Windy

[Lily1111]

"they,re there to excite us,
how can we resist."

Precisely! This was so well said. All this beauty surrounds us at every moment just waiting for us to take a moment to glimpse its magic and absorb its energy. Truly, how can we not?

Really enjoyed this poem!

[Rain]

Your writing has a simplistic beauty to it. It happens to be my favorite style to read. This piece reflects the words in your Bio. Beautiful. Rain..