empty soul

Another attempt at Haiku... i,m becoming quite obsessed.. ha.

 

 

 

 

Eyes rest on my soul

I turn my heart to the skies,

What do you see now?

Reviews

[Edmond Dantes]

Right!? Wicked poem, & the pic you accompanied with it, is perfect, love it. great lil read, i think i'll save it as a fav.

[Murphy]

Brilliant! "What do you see now?" I love how you end with that question, leaving the reader to come to their own conclusion. Do you really want to know what I see? hehehe

[Lily1111]

So few words but such meaning. Really enjoyed this one.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

the way you let the mind wonder upon this subject is wonderful. great poem.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

sweet Poem :)