Dying light

 

The light fades to dark,

  no stars fill the midnight sky,

    shadow fills my heart.

Reviews

[Tyler King]

refreshing.

I enjoy the way you write. Short and sweet, but powerful meaning. That's what I love about emotion. It doesn't have to be explained. Emotion answers itself.

Yeah, i have one Haiku if you'd like to check it out. It's called The Lesson.
If you have a particular favorite of your work you'd like me to admire lol, let me know.

kudos

Tyler :-D

[Edward Carr]

Another great haiku. I think you are a haiku master. If you take your word choices in your haikus and put them into longer poems your longer poems would be extremely publishable. "light, dark, shadows, midnight to describe sky, heart" all fantastic concrete image words. Great poem.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Short sweet and with a punch. Shaddow fills my heart. Love the line. Good write.

[Lily1111]

This haiku feels so ....lonely. It is amazing how well you conveyed such emotion within so few words. While the subject is dark, the writing is brilliant. Well done.

[Emily Rose]

Oh, how sad! For a haiku, you certainly managed to confine a lot of emotion into a mere seventeen syllables!