Lost

 

 

 

The wine flows like blood,

  running through my empty veins,

    how long before death?

Reviews

[Vanessa P]

Short but sweet. Even though this is a really short poem, the 3 lines were enough to convince me of the sadness and loneliness. Nice write.

[Edward Carr]

Hey very nice haiku. I really like it. Is the death the real one or the sexual "little death" of orgasm as wine is involved? Great poem though. Good intensity and fantastically vivid.

[The realest]

Haiku very enchanting with the picture and structure played beautifully to your choice of words. very nice

[Windy]

Short but VERY to the point! Not a pleasant thought or picture, but then I doubt it wa meant to be. Good job.