Lost dreams

A Poem by emz

Tears like cut glass fall,

Bleeds a river of lost dreams,

Waking moments gone.

© 2008 emz

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Jessica{is inspired by ..

Short, Sweet, and to the point. I like it. It is simple in its message, but gives a hint of deeper meaning. I love the picture you have with it. I love to see art going along with poetry, or vice versa.

I'm not sure if it is meant to be a haiku or not. I don't think the first line is five beats. But let me know if I am wrong.

Very nice job!

Jess

Posted 17 Years Ago

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emz

sunderland, England

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My name is Emma, i have been writing poetry since i was a young girl. I am also in the process of writing a novel. This is a complete different dicipline and i am finding it hard but will not give up... more..