falling into you

 

If i were a snowflake

i would softly, slowly float

onto your skin

melting into your body

i would flow through your veins

If i were a raindrop

i would gently, kindly fall

into your heart

sinking deep inside

enveloping your scarlett essence

If i were an autumn breeze

i would quietly, lovingly whisper

into your mind

blowing elegantly

i would engulf every

moment of your memories

If i were a sunbeam

i would warmly, sweetly touch

your clear blue eyes

washing out the hurt and

filling your sight with

only images of me.

Reviews

[beancountersar]

Extemely descriptive use of animating facets of nature. This poems has such a sweet tone and is elegantly written.

Very good.

[Murphy]

This is really beautiful... perhaps the finest Emz that I've read so far... language moves very nicely and paints a great landscape. Nice job!

[Michelle Tarnowski]

This is the way we should and be loved. Beautiful.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh my this is absolutely stunning work... talk about words of sweet love and devotion...

If i were a snowflake
i would softly, slowly float
onto your skin
melting into your body
i would flow through your veins

this is my favorite stanza but the whole poem melted my heart... LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS... going in my favs.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Very nicely written:

If i were a snowflake
i would softly, slowly float
onto your skin
melting into your body

And forever be a part of you, an unspoken reality. That's the vision I obtain from those lines.

Passionate. good write.

[Ray Hamilton]

This poem I can understand coming from your pen
Just from this write we can see what a sweet lovable lady you are
This was a pleasure to read
Thanks for sharing
Ray

Ps how did you get in such a good mood?
Must be a man around there someplace :) LOL

[Ari]

This flows really well. The movement of the poem reminds me a lot of the way a snowflake or raindrop would fall. Well done.